Over the last decade, colleges world over have slowly been gravitating away from purely merit-based assessments in their admissions processes. As a prospective applicant, your impressive academic transcripts, extracurricular talents, student leadership accolades and community service engagements, are all quantifiable achievements that give you a fighting chance to secure a spot in your dream college. However, with so many accomplished candidates vying for the same spots, the admissions process today is more competitive that it has ever been before. 

This is where your college application essays take centre stage.

Today, college application essays don’t simply assess your capacity for coherent expression and aptitude for academic writing; they offer colleges a unique insight into a applicant’s personality, passions, and perspectives.

 

Personal Insight Questions— What are they REALLY asking?

 

The University of California (UC) schools revamped their college application essay prompts post 2015 and replaced them with the new Personal Insight questions that you will be responding to today. As the words “Personal Insight” suggest, these questions encourage students to present a more holistic profile of themselves to the Admissions Committee. It gives you the opportunity to showcase defining life experiences, communicate your core values and perceptions, and in other words take charge of your application narrative to share what sets you apart from a pool of similarly accomplished peers. This is the one incontrovertible aspect of your UC application that is uniquely YOU! 

Let’s first take a quick look at the UC Personal Insight Essay Questions:

Applicants must respond to any four of the following eight questions, limiting themselves to 350 words per response.

1. Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.  
2. Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.
3. What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?  
4. Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.
5. Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?
6. Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.
7. What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?
8. Beyond what has already been shared in your application, what do you believe makes you stand out as a strong candidate for admissions to the University of California?

The UC website suggests that student respond to these questions like UC were a person, sharing aspects of your “personality, background, interests and achievements in your unique voice”. 

But let’s hit the brakes here for a minute, and consider these questions. While they seem fairly direct, where is the “Personal Insight” aspect of it, and what do you want the admissions committee to know? We recommend that you strike a balance between presenting yourself as a versatile, multifaceted candidate, while still playing to your strengths. 

 

And how do you do that? Here is an example for you:

 

It’s all in the approach you take to tackle each prompt. The idea that serves  as the focus of your essay matters just as much as how you present it.

For instance, a simple college application essay detailing a student’s prowess as a Basketball Team Captain, may be presented ineffectively as a long list of accolades; or transformed completely with an engaging anecdotal style, and by weaving meaningful themes like teamwork, leadership or epiphanies into the narrative.

 

The challenge of crafting meaningful Personal Insight narratives

 

How do you distil the essence of your character, circumstances, aspirations, accolades and experiences into 4 short 350-word essays? Or worse, what if you can’t find a story worth telling in those 4 essays?

Think of it like this. If you are a product of your life’s experiences, now at the cusp of adulthood, your life story is still being written; and no essay, or Statement of Purpose, no matter how long, can encompass everything it means to be you. So if you feel like you have a lot to say, what you choose to include in your college application essay will be just as important as what you exclude. Your main challenges will involve choosing the right questions and strategically curating the personal narratives the most strengthen your candidature.

On the other hand, if you find yourself grasping at narrative threads, unable to think of anything unique or momentous about your life or experiences; don’t make the mistake of turning your college application essay into an adaptation of your CV. Your main challenges will involve seeking inspiration outside the box, and perhaps digging deep into your life to elevate the mundane and find the extraordinary.  

The main challenge of the UC Personal Insight essays is that it is a delicate balancing act. Your four responses are distinct parts of a larger whole. Each response needs to be able to stand alone, as a coherent, impactful statement. However, when the four responses are considered as a whole, they must also serve as a cohesive narrative that bolsters your candidature.

What makes these essays especially tricky, is the stringent word limit. 350 words is really not a lot of words to mould into an effective narrative essay. But one of the best ways to make it work, is to imagine that you’re narrating a very short story. 

1. There’s no space for a traditional introduction or conclusion, and no time to build up to the central idea or turning point. 
2. So, you begin the story with an anecdotal hook that places you in the heart of the action within the story. 
3. Get to the point immediately, furnish the narrative with adequate personal detail, and focus on the impact of the story. 

It’s also important to recognize that because the format of the UC essays is so different from other Why-this-college or Why-this-Major college application essays, the standard guidance on how to write a college essay, may not work for these. We recommend writing these set of essays from scratch, however, if you have already written a Statement of Purpose, a Common Application essay, or the Coalition essays, keep an eye out for our next blog for innovative strategies on how to rework ideas from other essays to fit the UC prompts.

 

Brainstorming with the UC College Application Essay Prompts

 

Now that you have a clear idea of what to expect from the UC Personal Insight essays, let’s get started with a Brainstorming Activity to get all our creative ideas buzzing!

1. Go back to the list of prompts for the UC Personal Insight essays and take them down onto a notebook or your laptop. 
2. Think about which aspects of your student profile you would most like to highlight in your UC application. Which of these can you connect to the essay prompts provided?
3. Try to connect each of the 8 prompts with a certain component of your profile. It may be a personality trait, a detail regarding your background, an interest or an achievement. 
4. Now try to connect each of these components to an incident, around which you can build your narrative.
5. At the end of this Activity, create a table with 3 columns to organize your ideas. Each prompt should be matched with a component of your applicant profile that you wish to highlight, and supported by an incident.

 

Take a look at our friend Harry Potter’s Brainstorming Table:

The highlighted cells are his chosen ideas for further development.

Notice how Harry came up with zilch on the creativity prompt? It happens. So don’t fret if your Brainstorming table has a few empty cells. You’re not the only one. Each of these ideas will be developed into essay blueprints. So, once you’ve filled in your table, keep it close at hand till we return for an in-depth exploration of the individual UC Personal Insight prompts, alongside excerpts from UC college application essay examples.